firecleric said: "The instant I saw the words in this comic, I STOPPED PAYING ATTENTION!" Because words are the worst enemy of a person with no brains. Decent comic, but it seems a little to simple and amateur. Try adding some nice backgrounds, using a different font for the texts. I'm not tell you what to do, just providing suggestions ^_^.

The instant I saw the words in this comic, I STOPPED PAYING ATTENTION!

White text on black bg = nono. Especially with this many words.

Too many words.

i stopped reading at the word "drones" o.o...

read the prologue first jesus christ!

Eww More words that pictures.. Eww

'these drones' lol wut drones?

this comic made no sence. there is no setting, no description of ANY char and i dont know what is going on at all.

You might want to change the font.

Lol 5th box and scream =)

Too much writing, not enough pictures. Not that I mind reading, just that this entire comic seemed like one page of a book with small pictures put into it.

I would love it more if it was about LAG

looks like bleach or kingdom hearts O.o

Tip: Less text, more graphics. Its not that Basilers are stupid. A wall of text just makes your eyes blur.