It would look nicer if it wasn't on line paper.

dONT YOU U HAVE BETTER THING TO DO

Its pretty good

JoeBobJim said: "quiero taco bell" Si si, yo quiero taco bell. Me gusta tacos <(^__^)>

quiero taco bell

Nice drawing

His head looks like a taco. Overall good job.

iDenny said: " Hey there, since we're being perfectionists, I'd just like to say, you forgot to put a space between your comma in the second last sentence. Don't point out peoples grammar/spelling mistakes, unless you know them. It's quite rude." I agree with you, but anyone can make a mistake. Also, when you write in real life, you can't really tell if theres a space or not.

TheSprinkles said: " Well, the thing with grammar is, some people just don't know it. :] I'm sure you noticed this while playing Maplestory, look at some of the Smegas that flood your screen. Don't point out peoples grammar/spelling mistakes, unless you know them. It's quite rude. On topic: I love the drawing,maybe you should work on it more and add the 8 arms. It would look really cool :D." Hey there, since we're being perfectionists, I'd just like to say, you forgot to put a space between your

I see poo poo stain on paper, other than that it's really good ! I think you should add in the arms in the background though that'd be awesome.

MMan222 said: " 1. you forgot to put a question mark (?<-that thing) at the end of your sentence. 2. his/her dog obviously must have erased a line up there." It could have been a hypothetical question.

That's awesome =)

TheSprinkles said: " Well, the thing with grammar is, some people just don't know it. :] I'm sure you noticed this while playing Maplestory, look at some of the Smegas that flood your screen. Don't point out peoples grammar/spelling mistakes, unless you know them. It's quite rude. On topic: I love the drawing,maybe you should work on it more and add the 8 arms. It would look really cool :D." You're not too perfect at using proper grammar either.

Zak...................................................................................................................................................................................Ummmm! =]

MMan222 said: " 1. you forgot to put a question mark (?<-that thing) at the end of your sentence. 2. his/her dog obviously must have erased a line up there." Well, the thing with grammar is, some people just don't know it. :] I'm sure you noticed this while playing Maplestory, look at some of the Smegas that flood your screen. Don't point out peoples grammar/spelling mistakes, unless you know them. It's quite rude. On topic: I love the drawing,maybe you should work on it more and add the 8 arms.