FrozenBladeV said: "I soo barely get it. It seems to be a fail attempt at a comic. It's done okay, but plot and font fails. No offence meant." its not a comic its a graphic novel, shesh

Oh I thought you had kinda started in the middle of the story there, it's good but you need more panels less text.

Its amazing! :D

I soo barely get it. It seems to be a fail attempt at a comic. It's done okay, but plot and font fails. No offence meant.

stupid i hate it, its terrible, just stop now if you guys wanna criticize me about complaining you didnt read it if you did, and your still criticizing me then make one yourself and make sure it doesnt suck.

12jeff21 said: " keh kehm i get it as do many other basilers so wow you just lost" 'keh kehm'? I 'lost' what? When I said 'Basiler' I meant the 'average' basiler.

i thought it was going to be like classical music

Uh, you have 0 development of the characters. The font is also a pain to read. I can read it, but it's too curvature. Try Arial.

iLoveToDraw said: "Basilers aren't smart enough for this >_<.." keh kehm i get it as do many other basilers so wow you just lost

Kinda bad storyline? No offence...

i dont get it, what is it.

dosh, be friends for wat?

sounds corny

xKairuko said: "You're telling me that a level 110 bow can't beat a level 35 Sword? ...Wut. && The fight would be over as soon as the sword found its way to the bowstring." That's an oxymoron. And proof of what he says is true.

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