Her face... Sorry.

NoReason said: "Things wrong with this: 1) Gum bubble out of nowhere. 2) Sword looks plastic. 3) Her right hand is the wrong size. However, I do like the eyes, it would give a nice sense of melancholy if you changed the mouth and if you hadn't had stuck the bubble gum there." Things wrong with your criticism: 1) Cherry Gum is NX. 2)It's a Devil's Sunrise, it looks more real than the Maple version anyday. 3) It's called a 'fist', dumbass, make one yourself and see if it's the same size as an open

It would look better if the eyes were bigger IMO. Btw, hi Jen. :D

:OOOOOOO SISSY! JEN! Mwahahaha. That's amazzingg *_*

Looked like a shotgun as a thumbnail.

huanmark said: " a lil to much crirtizim in ur face, if u coulda just made ur post a lil less freakin annoying/compliated i would be a good cpnstructive critisizm!" Wow...CC please.

swedesFTW said: "a little too much space between the eyes and the nose vertically, and i think that if you made the eyes just a liiiiiiiitle bit bigger it would look awesome! great drawing overall!" a lil to much crirtizim in ur face, if u coulda just made ur post a lil less freakin annoying/compliated i would be a good cpnstructive critisizm!

looks likes she's rubbing it on the sword. maybe she's itchy O.o

XSOBOREDX said: "*Looks at where the DS points at* ( Yes, i am dirty, kinda. )" I like how she's holding the sword.

*Looks at where the DS points at* ( Yes, i am dirty, kinda. )

a little too much space between the eyes and the nose vertically, and i think that if you made the eyes just a liiiiiiiitle bit bigger it would look awesome! great drawing overall!

Im just wondering what a japanese school girl is doing with a ds

Nice hands! That sword looks like Paine's. What top/overall is that anyway?

ughh... when i first saw the screenshot on front page, i thought she was holding a guitar

MinuteMade said: "The eyes ruin it for me. =/"