nicolasm said: " WOOT =DDDDDD" nicolas is you real name? I am making the third part today

byocugan said: " there link O W E N D you got a place on the story" WOOT =DDDDDD

old borther? o.O

The text's a little bit small

its too small so its hard to read other than that i thought it was pretty cool

DDRStomp said: "I think everyone addressed the small issue, but it's good Also, your English seems to be getting slightly better. Maybe just because of size next time, try uploading the original image to Photobucket or another Online Image hoster and putting the link in the description, so we can see it full size." there link nicolasm said: " i think its from dragon ball (the very first dragon ball), the very first martial tournament.. there was this very thin man (forgot his name) that lived on

I think everyone addressed the small issue, but it's good Also, your English seems to be getting slightly better. Maybe just because of size next time, try uploading the original image to Photobucket or another Online Image hoster and putting the link in the description, so we can see it full size.

Midgetron said: "its very small, the first one was good so i didn't mind reading this second one. which was also good, keep going, i know English isn't your language but use reasoning to realize that things like lets go to home wont really make sense." He speaks the truth . A great piece of work again, I loved the editing and effects you've added to the characters and frames. Shows that you took you time, and everything seems to be coming along well. It's moving a pretty decent pace, so we're no

Epic Phail too small

its very small, the first one was good so i didn't mind reading this second one. which was also good, keep going, i know English isn't your language but use reasoning to realize that things like lets go to home wont really make sense.

ari141 said: "It's good, but you're trying to fit too much into an issue. When it's all cramped together, it becomes hard to read and almost impossible to appreciate the detail."

nicolasm said: " i think its from dragon ball (the very first dragon ball), the very first martial tournament.. there was this very thin man (forgot his name) that lived on a town that had its main water source dried up... so the man went to the tournament to get money to buy water for his town.. (but get his ass kicked by goku)" Then master Roshi gave him a capsule with tanks of water stored in it. Master Rosi was that Jakie Chun dude.

AHH MY EYES~~ bigger pl0x?

Too small,...can't read.....FAIL

ari141 said: "It's good, but you're trying to fit too much into an issue. When it's all cramped together, it becomes hard to read and almost impossible to appreciate the detail."