Kunleik said: "You just need to read up on some basics and you should get a lot better. I really like how the lines are clean, if anyone else can even understand what I mean. =]" yea i guess nad i go over my lines and bold them :]

You just need to read up on some basics and you should get a lot better. I really like how the lines are clean, if anyone else can even understand what I mean. =]

chris6059 said: "Honestly... this is fugly I don't know why mods accept all this degrading work these days" like u can do better ._.

it would be a cute and good drawing if you were like 4 ( no offense )

Cire21 said: " people like you make the world an unhappy place. insulting other people's hard work makes you feel better doesn't it? as for the picture, not all pictures need to be super fantastic. it's fan art, not a piece of work that needs to meet the expectations of an expert artist." The world is already an unhappy place -cuts self-

elementmage5 said: "Guys, learn the meaning of the word 'tact'. Maybe you could give her some constructive criticism rather than putting her down. put*" Kudos for fixing your parallelism! :D

You could fix the head a bit...Her eyes. o_O

well one thing i never want to be that my mouth is so little i can't even eat chip unless it 1/100 of the chip at a time sorry if it offense it just wat i think about it

chris6059 said: "Honestly... this is fugly I don't know why mods accept all this degrading work these days" people like you make the world an unhappy place. insulting other people's hard work makes you feel better doesn't it? as for the picture, not all pictures need to be super fantastic. it's fan art, not a piece of work that needs to meet the expectations of an expert artist.

Tact? Fine, needs more detailing. It's nice to attempt the shading aspect of drawings, but is mostly unnecessary. To start off on drawings, it helps to draw generic shapes like squares and circles, especially on the face, and then from those generic outlines you can draw more contours. It seems like you're taking that style of eyes from Japanese animation, but it's not really necessary. Less is more to begin with, and then more is better when you're finishing up. In simpler terms, draw a circle

Guys, learn the meaning of the word 'tact'. Maybe you could give her some constructive criticism rather than putting her down. put*

If people don't criticize your work, they're lying to you. But I guess if you're ok with that, then I'm okay with that (see, I just lied to you).

k now im bored ima go on maple :] Hai Ekto Thnx :] still working on urs

Huge head makes me smile. And I like the way the robe was done.

taotapp said: "I love the way you drew the openings in her robe (the neck area, the parts that lead into the arm areas, etc.) It looks like you were going for a chibi style with this. Try to make the hands a bit larger next time, and when you do the staff and you want to make a crisp straight line, try doing it in a single quick stroke, instead of carefully attempting to make a straight line. It's somehow easier that way. Or just use a ruler. Whatever works. xD Anyway, grats to your friend. :D"