Screen #109694

Submitted by XioNeo

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Comments (15)

gintokis 05/10/08

Poor kitty lol

wyatt

This will be interesting, I am more in for the story, which i give you props for.

exothief10 05/08/08

are the guns cash shop for msea or is it bannedstory

xenytio 05/08/08

I spot a Typo~ Wounder~ And your master is Santa! Yay presents~

oliverblade 05/08/08

They killed the kitty, It was from iron man, cept he killed a dog for no reason.

jokke91 05/08/08

chut said: "lol true, all comics r about omg master you warned me ROFL and the assultar position is overused" yeah.. i do that everyday..

3dmc 05/08/08

Lethys said: " And less triple dots. :P" they're called ellipses. they are used when you want to continue what your saying without starting a new sentence.when you want to add feeling to your writing etc...

lethys 05/08/08

HEATHARR said: "If you further your comic, remember to capitalize your "I"s and put a space after your commas. It just looks a whole lot better." And less triple dots. :P

heatharr 05/08/08

If you further your comic, remember to capitalize your "I"s and put a space after your commas. It just looks a whole lot better.

chut 05/08/08

lol true, all comics r about omg master you warned me ROFL and the assultar position is overused

frozenbladev 05/08/08

Epic Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail Fail. Epic Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche. End of flame.

xinoria 05/08/08

you went overboard with ellipses

cannedtomato 05/08/08

Jake305 said: "How original, ONLY about 60% of basils screens have dodgy storylines with the "assaulter position" in them. We need more joke comics :P Edit: 3/10"

marzlin 05/08/08

KodiacMoment said: "Please use commas, it makes it look much more neat (I guess). Don't forget periods as well." haha periods =D ANYWAY, i agree with everyone else. overused cliche storyline about a DARK and MYSTERIOUS "assassin" or "hunter" of sorts who goes around killing/getting killed because he can and its free. the end. perhaps if he randomly turned into a chicken and crossed the road youd get more "i like"s -lumpy

blank 05/08/08

ickarumba1 said: "Okay. Nice comic, but i have some advice for you: KILL THIS COMIC NOW! This is unoriginal, boring and has incorrect grammar and spelling mistakes. I agree with Jake305" QFT