FaramirCapt said: "Lol Night fox on a Bowman? O.o" So what? It's just a comic -_-

Lol Night fox on a Bowman? O.o

WaffleStorm said: "Slow story. Uninteresting story. Just because characters wear the same color all over doesn't mean they match." It's only been 2 chapters.

Slow story. Uninteresting story. Just because characters wear the same color all over doesn't mean they match.

better "graphics" then most of the other comics. but its boring. same old crap like ALL the other comics, decked out in high-level gear getting in a fight. and the timing is next to horrible, he goes to ellina... just because, and the guy tells a complete stranger his intentions... just because.

It took a while to get from the first comic to the second. o__o

You should make the evil guy die and as he's dying he's telling the good guy to take revenge ont he general. gtg to school nao. ):

MakeMeRich said: "Err... the way you're handling the plot could be better. He shoots an arrow. Other dude dodges, and then the archer spills everything? Just like that?" Well.. I didn't really feel like making 4 panels of them staring at each other trying to figure out how strong their enemy might be. rangedanger9 said: "Wow.....Shouldn't the evil dude like kill the main character when hes momenterally distracted rather then just saying fine and telling him his little story. And shouldn't the ma

lamRight said: "My only issue is validity. A single guy is strong enough to burn down an entire town yet can't kill this guy in a single swipe... I dunno..." Maybe the mage is stronger then he looks also!

Wow.....Shouldn't the evil dude like kill the main character when hes momenterally distracted rather then just saying fine and telling him his little story. And shouldn't the main character just kill the evil dude while hes distracted as well?

banditjun said: " The guy can move but the town can't...?" He killed the people in the town too, is my guess. That means to systematically kill off an entire town, there had to be some resistance. Either by citizen or by military.

it is ok, but the dialogue is a little awkward.

lamRight said: "My only issue is validity. A single guy is strong enough to burn down an entire town yet can't kill this guy in a single swipe... I dunno..." The guy can move but the town can't...?

lamRight said: "My only issue is validity. A single guy is strong enough to burn down an entire town yet can't kill this guy in a single swipe... I dunno..." I would say atleast 12 people should do that...

My only issue is validity. A single guy is strong enough to burn down an entire town yet can't kill this guy in a single swipe... I dunno...