Cliche, boring, lazyness is clearly shown, an NX ho as a main char. typical. Light attack. Lol wut? It cant get anymore lame. Stop. Nao. A screen with a naked sin saying "lul wutst4rz jo0 thr0w?" would be better.

lol@ill take u home!1!1Z!1

magesya said: "ty for ur commetns i know i have spelling error *i proably spelt that wrong* but why does everyone thinks it's so funny" Erm-- why'd you put 'i'll take you home'?

ty for ur commetns i know i have spelling error *i proably spelt that wrong* but why does everyone thinks it's so funny

its not bad.. just make the plot more interseting later on

jimmix said: "I'll take you home LOL"

GreenDragon said: "FAIL 1. No backround 2. Same and boring avatars. 3. Spelling and grammar 4. But plot 5. Expressions fail" Just as much fail as you Mr. T.

bump i still cant stop laughing when i read this most ridiculous thing ive read in a while

LOL! This is hilarious!

I'll take you home LOL

i sincerely hope this is satire

hahhahahahahahahhahahahahahahaha CLICHE

How come they're flying?

Kaizu said: "1st. Work on your grammar. 2nd. Use facial expressions. 3rd. You should use a background. 4th. I think it's better to start an intro by introducing the characters. And the story. All I know so far, those " evil " dudes are trying to kill all of the chosen ones. 5th. Use a different font, makes it more comfortable to read. This advice is not oblige. Try using these advices. It'll improve your comic. Or is that what I think? " No you're not the only one... This comic is like... BlehTC

1st. Work on your grammar. 2nd. Use facial expressions. 3rd. You should use a background. 4th. I think it's better to start an intro by introducing the characters. And the story. All I know so far, those " evil " dudes are trying to kill all of the chosen ones. 5th. Use a different font, makes it more comfortable to read. This advice is not oblige. Try using these advices. It'll improve your comic. Or is that what I think?