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Submitted by sorikosu

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Comments (15)

may2794 04/27/08

Viral said: " you should be smacked with a hammer>.>" You don't have a sense of humor, do you?

narutodude7 04/27/08

"Based on a true made up story" roflmao

seeed 04/27/08

give me the rest plox

ptphoenix 04/27/08

sorikosu said: " Zane's only gonna be the main character the first few chapters. His son then becomes the main character and everything will be in color. But for now, that's all I'll say since I've never made a series before." alright then, go on. lots of people seem to like it, including me.

sorikosu 04/27/08

Grammer mistakes? *reads over again* Gah! My job as an intern grammer Nazi is over!

pieofdoom123 04/27/08

I like it but fixie the grammar.

infiniteiqx 04/27/08

has potential keep on going, i wanna see how this turns out =D

penguinlvr 04/27/08

Viral said: " tk0209 said: "this looks amazing but you have to replace the word "gun" with "pico-pico hammer" along with all images of guns and/or firearms. thank you have a nice day" you should be smacked with a hammer>.>" It's a joke, idiot. He's talking about how Nexon's censoring out all the guns and big swords in Showa's new mobs for gMS.

soldjango 04/27/08

change the text. it seems stretched to me. but rest has potential. keep going.

yos2 04/27/08

It's good, just work on the grammar. "on's zane's"?

o2cool 04/27/08

Seems good, continue it please

heatharr

It's really good so far. next one please!

imnothungry 04/27/08

Nice, continue please.

viral 04/27/08

tk0209 said: "this looks amazing but you have to replace the word "gun" with "pico-pico hammer" along with all images of guns and/or firearms. thank you have a nice day" you should be smacked with a hammer>.>

salmondela 04/27/08

wys00 said: "continue please "