Screen #106778
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Comments (15)
cardboardbox 04/15/08
A screenie about school onoes
someasiansin 04/15/08
Don't mean to flame but... It's good to organize your panels and the dialogue so readers no where to read and when.
bubblegum18 04/15/08
Uhm, so the girl is having a bad dream, then wakes up and goes to school..?o_o'
evelynmayngo 04/15/08
Why an anime for a comic it's been in manga!
steven2619 04/15/08WORST. ANIME. EVER. Skip it to 17:00, and you will cry, or laugh. But in any case, it just fails. And now there's a COMIC of it? This is indeed a contestant for the most retarded comics contest.
oliverblade 04/15/08
lQuarantine said: "F-- would read again." You would have to, ITs so darn hard to understand..
lquarantine 04/15/08
A++ would read again.
jigoku 04/15/08
what..the story line so far is like the lullaby my sweet melody link ... i dunno if u did copied or gt inspirations from the vid bt .. its just so same
fire7452 04/15/08
brettbrains said: ""
brettbrains 04/14/08
Yos2 said: "Omg this sucks."
idkdude 04/14/08
QuackMoo said: " I would like you to check your grammar first." if that was to the guy you quoted... he doesnt really need to because hes just casually commenting on a picture. i think it is a lame and useless flame to say that to somebody who complains about somebody not putting very much effort into grammar isnt using proper grammar themselves because they do not need to its like writing a paper and turning it in for a grade, if you forget a comma, or spell something wrong, it helps if a teach
quackmoo 04/14/08
blaze360 said: "ZOMG CONSTRUCTIVE CRITASICM >< 1.Use a diffrent font color, say a darker one 2.try to order your script better and use captions or speech bubbles. 3.names, prolouge, and an intro if u please >~< 4.check ur grammer im pretty sure "gonna" doesnt have 2 A's 5.storyline to short to jumpy to dull. rawr." I would like you to check your grammar first.
yos2 04/14/08
Omg this sucks.
vanilla 04/14/08blaze360 said: "ZOMG CONSTRUCTIVE CRITASICM >< 1.Use a diffrent font color, say a darker one 2.try to order your script better and use captions or speech bubbles. 3.names, prolouge, and an intro if u please >~< 4.check ur grammer im pretty sure "gonna" doesnt have 2 A's 5.storyline to short to jumpy to dull. rawr." #4, you mean spelling. P.S., it's Grammar. :O
gl1tch3d 04/14/08
order the panels, order the speech bubbles, use darker font, read it before you post it, and next time try to post something at least decent
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