Well, at least I can read the text this time...

Ok for the last time, I've made the entire series. Let me quote one of my edits, "-points to post- They're at my profile so IF you want to read them, go do that. I just posted part 2 so people might read that... I really don't care if bash on this. I admit it's not the best work, but it was just for fun (My fun, not your fun, my fun. Go get your own fun )" This also means that since I've made the entire series already, it's too late to fix anything. Since nobody will read any of my posts, I will

this is........ boring

omg they're flying!

Mm.. It's well made and all.. but it's short. Also, it's hard to stay on top of the plot when it gets so boring. There's nothing but talk in it, the characters don't show humor, but the quirky names do. Umm.. just pointing that out. Practice practice practice.

Goatfry said: "lulz if you grew up in any major city on the east coast you'd know that half the time the actual bad guys are the cops. thats why when people have problems they just call the Fire Department." Word.

heckguy said: " You live in New York too?" Baltimore. its much worse than New York xD i used to live there anyway. we moved.

Goatfry said: "lulz if you grew up in any major city on the east coast you'd know that half the time the actual bad guys are the cops. thats why when people have problems they just call the Fire Department." You live in New York too?

Goatfry said: "lulz if you grew up in any major city on the east coast you'd know that half the time the actual bad guys are the cops. thats why when people have problems they just call the Fire Department." QFT

lulz if you grew up in any major city on the east coast you'd know that half the time the actual bad guys are the cops. thats why when people have problems they just call the Fire Department.

I like your names :]

Blueisorange said: "Theyre just standing there... talking... pretty uninteresting. It has potential though, so don't screw it up." exactly. this comic has allot of potential and it caught my attention, but you need to start advancing the plot or everyone's going to lose interest.

Susan, another way i see it still doesn't get well - Perhaps you can try with Bannedstory and a Good Paint program to edit the characters. Some people manages to use them. :/

try to use speech bubbles from now on. it makes it easier and quicker to read and keeps the basilers interested. yah... i like your backgrounds too... but they make no sense.

more action plawks..? x3