Rofl. "Hey, don't come near me if you don't want any trouble" "Oh okay." "Loltoobadnub :D"

oh lawd a bully!

It looks interesting but yea, there could be more dialogues in it..like more useful dialogues? Most of them arent more than like, 1 sentence =/. Try to make the scenes a bit more interesting by having different angles or like close ups it helps make it more interesting. =] Just a few tips. Nice comic tho.

OhMiOhMai said: "=/ that was kinda stupid." corniest word choice ever dont make a third please this was pointless

So what are we not supposed to forget? How two children were horribly molested by a gang of male strippers? I'd rather not remember that. o_o

i think the bully wants to go to Late. the land of awesome! where every man and woman want to go.

The other two bad guys look like male strippers. Other than that and some grammar problems, I wonder what's gonna happen next.

you know how he said Half of this story is true? well in the next one its gonna show him and his freind beating the hell out of those punks While in the true story those 2 guys got there ass whooped by the punks

Too late* Other then that...make it more dramatic..its just boring right now.

=/ that was kinda stupid.

DriftingBoi said: " No one looks for spelling errors. They are obvious as hell and pull away from any enjoyment the comic could have provided. This comic provides nothing. There is no progression, you are apparently building a story between two kids racing, and have some thugs that think they are "to" late for something?" He said " I dont want any trouble" Then the gangster said " to late"

Wow. . . . . . . lol words u need to know =.= - is slowpoke not slopoke. . . . - is you are on not your on - is too late not to late. . . But it is good

Kiddies, crackheads, and gangbangers, oh my!

It`s gooooood. I can`t wait for next one :O

It should be "too late"...